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Submitted: February 17, 2008
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Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D50
Shutter Speed: 10/5000 second
F Number: F/11.0
Focal Length: 45 mm
Date Picture Taken: Feb 15, 2008, 5:46:09 PM

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Model: McKenna
Photographer: Me


So I re-shot this and like it more than the first other than the house. I might submit another one but I'm not sure. Let's see if you guys like it as much as my first one. I like it more because of the sharpness. You can see the actual opening of her mouth.

Comments and favourites are greatly appreciated. :heart:
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like you said this 1 is sharper
my only complaint is that her arms are stiff

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They say you reap what you sow; if that's true, then I've stitched pretty badly...
Wow its amazing.
I really love silhouettes.
And best thing about this is the burst of sunlight coming out of her...

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-Matthew William
This one is definately sharper, and a nice image on its own. It's crisp, you can see her smile, and she's almost nothing but silhouette.

That said I'm personally a bigger fan of C-Jump 1, mostly because of the bolder colors; but also for the blur of motion. The lack of anything obviously human near the foreground also adds a certain mood element that is lacking in the second shot.

Mind you, this is all just my personal opinion, so in the long run it really doesn't amount to squat; and I don't have any technical critique except that this one might benefit from a little cropping. It might look better if the space around your model is evened up a bit. It's heavier to the right and the top of the picture than it is to the left and the bottom. Of course that might just be me, as I have a tendency towards symmetry or total askewness, so if something is just a little off, it bugs me.

I might be rambling now, so I'll shush.

Pretty pictures anyway. :)
I really like this one! :sun: the first was simply beautiful..and this is full of feeling of renndom.. The idea of "c-jump" is great and I will like to see "c-jump 3" "c-jump-4".... :P GREAT!
it's something magic in this photo...
... i wanna summer!

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I :heart: MT
yeah i agree. thank you.
and i know summer needs to come.

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kill me or are you too much of a coward after you hurt me like this?
tehe yay! your comments always please me. and i will be sure to put up at least one more. =) thank you so much for looking and commenting.

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kill me or are you too much of a coward after you hurt me like this?
yeah i'm just not sure how to tell a dancer not to do that. it's kind of the way she does it but i agree with you in that it makes it weaker.

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kill me or are you too much of a coward after you hurt me like this?
yeah i think silhouettes have a beautiful simplicity ton them. and the sunlight is like the best part. yay. :hug:

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kill me or are you too much of a coward after you hurt me like this?

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